"Dancing Choose" by TV on the Radio

First version: TV on the Radio's latest video "Dancing Choose" engages the viewer with an artistic vision of man trying to find his way through a cosmopolitan comic book landscape of disorienting angles that leader singer Tunde Adebimpe tries to sort out with an emphatic wave of his hands to a beat that is as rapid fire as the lyrics he spits of urban American confusion.

Second version: TV on the Radio's latest video "Dancing Choose" continues their trend of artsy music videos with the vision of a man stumbling through a cosmopolitan comic book landscape of disorienting angles and textures. Leader singer Tunde Adebimpe tries to make sense of the urban chaos with an emphatic wave and clap of his hands as he spits the tale of American angst to a beat that will have you tapping your dancing shoe.

One sentence excercise= very hard and surprisingly verbose.
Two sentences=seemingly better?